Alana kept her head ducked down as bullets whizzed by her. She couldn't even peek out to check on the safety of her dad and Jude. She just stayed huddled down and hoped for the best. Earlier, Antonio had given her a gun. She barely knew how to use it, but she clutched it as if she had been a gun fighter her whole life.
"Shit, shit, shit!" Alana said to herself, regretting ever even coming up with this plan.
The sound of gun shots was deafening. Sparks flew as bullets ricocheted off cars and street signs. They shot in all different directions and the flashes from the gun barrels as bullets fired from them, was blinding.
For whatever reason, Alana thought of her mother in that moment. She could see her now, standing with her hands on her hips and saying, "I told you so." She'd probably get herself shot trying to prove she was right and Antonio was wrong. That's where Alana and her mother differed. Her mother was a martyr. She was more than happy to hurt herself or put herself in harms way just to make Alana feel sorry for her. Alana was nothing like her. This time she had spent with her dad taught her one thing; her father was a bad ass and she took after him.
Mustering up some courage, Alana peak her head out from behind the dumpster and saw Antonio and Jude trapped between the shootout. Antonio was desperately trying to get closer to her and Jude was close behind him. Just then one of the gang members spotted Antonio and began firing at him. A few other members began firing at them as well. Antonio and Jude tried their best to fire back but moving even a slight inch meant the end of their life.
Suddenly, and without hesitation, Alana stood up, stepped out from her hiding spot and pulled the trigger of her gun. She fired relentlessly at the gang until they retreated behind cars, dumpsters and houses. She even shot a few of them but the wounds weren't life threatening. Most of her bullets just went through arms and legs.
The sound of approaching motorcycles was a welcoming sound and was the one thing that distracted Alana. The other thing that stopped her little almost killing spree was Antonio's strong grip pulling her back and behind the dumpster.
"Woo!" Jude screamed out of excitement. "Alana you are out of your mind!" he told her.
"What the fuck is wrong with you?!" Antonio shouted. "I told you to stay down, Alana."
"They were shooting at you!" Alana explained.
"I didn't ask for you help! You could have got hurt!" he yelled back.
"We don't have time for this!" Jude yelled through the gun fire. "We have to go! This isn't our fight!" he said motioning for their gang to back off.
"See that house over there?" Antonio said pointing at a small house at the end of the block. It was dark. The street light overhead had been shot out. It was their best bet if they wanted to be safe and clear of the shooting. "We gotta get over there. I'll be in front, Alana you stay behind me, and Jude you follow behind her. Got it?" Alana and Jude nodded and followed Antonio's directions.
Waiting for the other gang to start back shooting at the cops, Antonio led Alana and Jude out into the street. As they made it to the middle of the block, a member of Antonio's gang opened fire. The gang fighting with the detectives and other arriving officers, turned and shot back. A meth house caught in the shower of bullets burst into flames. The explosion caught everyone's attention, but the shooting never stopped. At that moment, and in a flash, Jude fell to the ground. A bullet had struck him in the head.
"Jude!" Alana screamed.
Suddenly a bullet tore through her shoulder and then another through her stomach. Antonio stopped in his tracks. His best friend was dead and his daughter was dying. No longer caring for the rest of the bloodshed around him, Antonio walked back to his Alana. He knelt down beside her and did his best to stop her bleeding, as the gun fight carried on without him. Words couldn't even leave his lips. He just stared down in shock at Alana.
"Not again." he finally managed to say. "Please not this time."
"Dad..." Alana started in pain. "I can't..." she told him.
"Shhh." Antonio told her closing his eyes.
"I told you so." said Detective Weir as he suddenly appeared. "You'll never be a free man."
Detective Weir stood over Jude's dead body. He frowned as he made eye contact with Alana. This was exactly what he had been trying to tell Antonio from day one. There was no freedom from his life. No mattered what he did or how many times he replayed his past, there was never going to be a win in his life or the lives of the people closest to him.
"Come on, Antonio." Detective Weir said kneeling down next to Alana. "It's time to wake up an face your reality. I'm just trying to help you." he compassionately told him.
The gun fight had now been pushed to the back of his mind. The bullets still zipped by. Bodies on all sides dropped to the ground after being hit. Antonio watched his friends and family die around him, but not one time did a bullet hit him. He was just there in this constant reminder of his own mistakes.
"I can't live with you." Alana told her father with the little breath she had left. "Just wake up..."
(To Be Continued)
"Shit, shit, shit!" Alana said to herself, regretting ever even coming up with this plan.
The sound of gun shots was deafening. Sparks flew as bullets ricocheted off cars and street signs. They shot in all different directions and the flashes from the gun barrels as bullets fired from them, was blinding.
For whatever reason, Alana thought of her mother in that moment. She could see her now, standing with her hands on her hips and saying, "I told you so." She'd probably get herself shot trying to prove she was right and Antonio was wrong. That's where Alana and her mother differed. Her mother was a martyr. She was more than happy to hurt herself or put herself in harms way just to make Alana feel sorry for her. Alana was nothing like her. This time she had spent with her dad taught her one thing; her father was a bad ass and she took after him.
Mustering up some courage, Alana peak her head out from behind the dumpster and saw Antonio and Jude trapped between the shootout. Antonio was desperately trying to get closer to her and Jude was close behind him. Just then one of the gang members spotted Antonio and began firing at him. A few other members began firing at them as well. Antonio and Jude tried their best to fire back but moving even a slight inch meant the end of their life.
Suddenly, and without hesitation, Alana stood up, stepped out from her hiding spot and pulled the trigger of her gun. She fired relentlessly at the gang until they retreated behind cars, dumpsters and houses. She even shot a few of them but the wounds weren't life threatening. Most of her bullets just went through arms and legs.
The sound of approaching motorcycles was a welcoming sound and was the one thing that distracted Alana. The other thing that stopped her little almost killing spree was Antonio's strong grip pulling her back and behind the dumpster.
"Woo!" Jude screamed out of excitement. "Alana you are out of your mind!" he told her.
"What the fuck is wrong with you?!" Antonio shouted. "I told you to stay down, Alana."
"They were shooting at you!" Alana explained.
"I didn't ask for you help! You could have got hurt!" he yelled back.
"We don't have time for this!" Jude yelled through the gun fire. "We have to go! This isn't our fight!" he said motioning for their gang to back off.
"See that house over there?" Antonio said pointing at a small house at the end of the block. It was dark. The street light overhead had been shot out. It was their best bet if they wanted to be safe and clear of the shooting. "We gotta get over there. I'll be in front, Alana you stay behind me, and Jude you follow behind her. Got it?" Alana and Jude nodded and followed Antonio's directions.
Waiting for the other gang to start back shooting at the cops, Antonio led Alana and Jude out into the street. As they made it to the middle of the block, a member of Antonio's gang opened fire. The gang fighting with the detectives and other arriving officers, turned and shot back. A meth house caught in the shower of bullets burst into flames. The explosion caught everyone's attention, but the shooting never stopped. At that moment, and in a flash, Jude fell to the ground. A bullet had struck him in the head.
"Jude!" Alana screamed.
Suddenly a bullet tore through her shoulder and then another through her stomach. Antonio stopped in his tracks. His best friend was dead and his daughter was dying. No longer caring for the rest of the bloodshed around him, Antonio walked back to his Alana. He knelt down beside her and did his best to stop her bleeding, as the gun fight carried on without him. Words couldn't even leave his lips. He just stared down in shock at Alana.
"Not again." he finally managed to say. "Please not this time."
"Dad..." Alana started in pain. "I can't..." she told him.
"Shhh." Antonio told her closing his eyes.
"I told you so." said Detective Weir as he suddenly appeared. "You'll never be a free man."
Detective Weir stood over Jude's dead body. He frowned as he made eye contact with Alana. This was exactly what he had been trying to tell Antonio from day one. There was no freedom from his life. No mattered what he did or how many times he replayed his past, there was never going to be a win in his life or the lives of the people closest to him.
"Come on, Antonio." Detective Weir said kneeling down next to Alana. "It's time to wake up an face your reality. I'm just trying to help you." he compassionately told him.
The gun fight had now been pushed to the back of his mind. The bullets still zipped by. Bodies on all sides dropped to the ground after being hit. Antonio watched his friends and family die around him, but not one time did a bullet hit him. He was just there in this constant reminder of his own mistakes.
"I can't live with you." Alana told her father with the little breath she had left. "Just wake up..."
(To Be Continued)
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